806. Mrr Mrr Mrr Mrr!

10th Dec 2014, 5:30 AM
806. Mrr Mrr Mrr Mrr!
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Dyonus 10th Dec 2014, 5:30 AM edit delete
Dyonus
This is a comic that has been sitting in my scripts folder for a while. I didn't really care for it. I liked the concept, but not the execution. Looked it again for the first time in a while and I came to realize that it was just too wordy. Got rid of some lines and I feel it's a bit better. Maybe not great, but certainly better. Just goes to show that too much dialogue can ruin a comic.
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